Sunday, May 29, 2016

Egg Diary


                                                    Diary Entry Number 1
Born into the giant egg world


There I was sitting in my lovely egg tray nice and snuggled in with all my egg friends. When all of a sudden... BAM the light just turned on and I was quickly grabbed by a HUMONGOUS egg. This humongous egg had hands and it just took me out of my tray WITHOUT EVEN ASKING. How rude. Then I was laid down on the table I quickly rolled until I rolled to the edge of the table, but I was caught just before I hit the floor. I saw the giant egg grab some pens. It started drawing on me! Then I realised the giant egg didn't mean any harm it drew me some cute hair, ears, eyes the giant egg even gave me my own bed. Now I don't have to be with those noisy eggs when I sleep. I was also given a name the giant egg named me LUX! I didn't understand the name but I was ok with it. Turns that name is from a game. The bed was placed in a container the giant egg added a nice bell to it. The next day I was brought to the giant eggs... SCHOOL??? I didn't know giant egg like this go to school. I slept through the morning when the giant egg had TV station.Until I was woken up by someone holding me and throwing me in the air. I almost thought I would never see the sun ever again aft that horrible experience. I managed to survive but I didn't think I could take much longer, I was brought to a classroom and I was greeted by other eggs. I could relate to them! They had all been taken from their homes, drawn on, given a new bed and took to school. I was SUPER tired after that so right now I am taking a nap.

Thursday, May 26, 2016

Rain Writing

                              Rain Writing


My writing goal so far this term has been to write complete sentences showing where one sentence ends by putting appropriate punctuation, and starting the next sentence with a capital letter.

Here is a piece of writing about the rain

DRIP DROP SPLISH SPLASH

I look outside my window. Rain falls down onto the ground, smashing down like a pile of paper slamming down onto a desk. As the rain starts getting heavier, it paints the window, puddles start to form and I see people opening their umbrellas.  Little kids are running around and screaming frantically “ A TORNADO IS COMING HIDE!!” I simply ignore them and keep staring outside my window and imagine what it would be like if i were out there.

I see children scampering around like a bunch of wild horses, they are all desperate to get shelter since the rain was so loud and heavy.  Suddenly the rain stops. There is an ominous silence that which I take my time to slowly get up. I am silent.

The sun came out, puddles started drying up everything returned back to normal. Except one thing… It rained again. ; - ;


So how do you think I’m going with my goal?